One Command. Script, B-Roll, Render, Done. Self-Host Your Video Engine.

• Hook is clean and earned — 'one terminal command, no cuts' sets a verifiable contract and the storyboard keeps it.
• 'No queue, no SaaS dashboard between you and the output' is keeper brand language; screenshot this for the style guide.
• The 47-second render claim is the single biggest risk: no machine spec, no video length context. On a 2019 Intel MBP this number collapses. Either qualify it ('47 sec on M-series, your mileage varies') or drop the number and say 'renders locally — no queue'.
• Scene s4 rows show 'Scene IDs printed: s1, s8' — a viewer reads this as two IDs, not 'first through last'. Rewrite to 'Scenes generated: 8' or show a real list fragment.
• Technical pipeline (script → storyboard → Pexels b-roll ranked 9:16 → Remotion render → mp4+thumb+caption) maps accurately to the actual codebase. No invented stages.
• Utility scores at 7 because this is a demo, not a tutorial — it proves the machine works but doesn't transfer a decision or skill. Acceptable for top-of-funnel but a single 'when to self-host vs use the API' beat would push it to 9.
• 34-second total runtime is dense; the 6-second phone mockup in s7 is the one scene that earns the extra time. All others at 4s are tight but executable.
• Before/after in s6 is specific and honest — 'SaaS queue / wait in line' vs 'Your machine / 47 sec'. Conceptually strong even if the number needs qualification.
• CTA 'Star the repo. Run it yourself.' is direct, no fake urgency, no lead magnet. Correct.

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